A poem in celebration of NaPoWriMo 2021, Day 1, April 1, 2021. I know it’s not my usual style, but I had fun with the “out of my comfort zone” prompt for today, to write a poem inspired by this song and video.
avocado jello
walking into spring
full and fat
as accordion squeeze
as avocado jello
bathed in the blooming blush
of flirting with a staccato tenor
groovin’ swayin’
tickle those keys
saxophone steppin’ on a kitty’s tail
simplistic little backbeat
of the 8th grade band concert
all hopped up on an audience and an evening out
hit hit hit hit hit hitttttttt it
scattin’ jazzin’ feeling free real loose
like eating buttered toast with marmalade
in an underwater amphitheater
serenaded by crustaceans on the tuba
newness invades
with an abalone grip on my heart
raise up, tear down, grow and die
don’t stop working just ’cause the world goes round
Your song hit three little bones
and a nerve
i’ve got the whole world in my hands
sittin’ in His hand
original fireworks from the face of adam and
paisley gourds beat out an ancient rhythm
my little kingdom
expands and contracts, a brief heartbeat in history
[…] our featured participant is A Softer Shade of Red, who stepped out of her comfort zone to pen a poem titled “avocado jello,” which sounds […]
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How fabulous! I guess the risk paid off! Thank you!
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Thank you so much. I very much enjoyed reading your works.
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Thank you! I am so glad.
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Oh this is a strong, vibrant voice! Congrats on getting featured. It was well deserved, and I’m glad it led me to this gem. 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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I love the lines “Your song hit three little bones / and a nerve”. That final line is also spectacular, almost as if I could feel the poem expanding and contracting in a final breath.
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The three little bones and a nerve was my personal fav as well! Thank you, Carol, for taking the time to read and comment!
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Oh, how very exciting! You rock– and so does your poem! Congrats, warmly. Glad I came to look. Keep going. I loved your poem. I wish you Miracles. Selma (https://selmamartin.com )
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Thank you, Selma! I am glad you came to look as well. I will check out your work!
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What a happy feeling I got!
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Woohoo! Just the feeling I was wanting to convey!
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Well done!! Love the images! I’m still smiling 😊
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Excellent use of nouns and verbs!
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Thank you!
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[…] Today, our featured participant is A Softer Shade of Red, who stepped out of her comfort zone to pen a poem titled “avocado jello,” which sounds like a […]
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Thanks for the link!
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Congrats on being featured! It sounds so unique. Lovely voice there.
“my little kingdom/ expands and contracts, a brief heartbeat in history” beautiful closing lines.
Deepa
https://deepazworld.blogspot.com/
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Thank you, Deepa!
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Enjoyed reading this. Had a wonderful beat to it.
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Thank you, Namratha!
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